Gaila/Kirk Porn Beta Needed

I'm doing my last past on the draft of my Gaila/Kirk porn, and I need a good eye. Preferably somebody familiar with the fandom to see if it reads okay in that respect, but anyone who can do structure, spelling, flow, etc. will be just fine.

Thank you very much, igrockspock! :D

Short, but FULL of dragons!

Happy birthday, lunar47! Hope you have a great one! :D

A big HAPPY BIRTHDAY also to President Obama!

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So... about this week's Weeds? I'm gonna guess that Nancy tells Senor Sexy Mayor to go fuck himself, yeah? ( spoiler )

And how about that bathroom scene! It's like EW! and HAHAHAHAAHA and... that's almost kinda hot? All at the same time.

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Busy writing today, but of course there are DRAGONS! Look, the new baby grew up! And Guess what? It's ANOTHER BOY! Jeeze, poor Jessica. Well... I need to name the newbie and decide who's going to hit on poor Jess this week!